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Subject:Re: I like mine better, but I don't know why. From:kcronin -at- daleen -dot- com To:"TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com> Date:Thu, 17 Jan 2002 09:59:22 -0700
John-
What if you just changed the intro line to allow your bullets to make more
grammatical sense?
Example:
This new process enables your business to:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
- Confirm Level of authorization
- etc.....
If you're a stickler for always introducing lists with a complete
sentence, you could write something like this:
This new process enables your business to do the following:
- Improve adherence to corporate discount policies
- Automate workflow of schedule of authorization table lookup to:
- Confirm Level of authorization
- etc.....
Hope this helps!
- Keith Cronin
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